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Ignitus 12: Waiting _old_

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He thought he heard something outside; he went to the balcony, to see what it was. He was hoping that Spyro had returned from Dante's Freezer... but he found nothing, to his disappointment. He lay down, deciding to wait there a while.

Spyro had not been gone all that long, but to Ignitus, it felt like an eternity. The thought that something bad might have happened to Spyro lurked into his mind, but he immediately struck it down; he knew that he shouldn't doubt Spyro's abilities, nor did he wish to. His faith in Spyro was unquestionable.

But still, waiting there, doing nothing, while Spyro was off fighting enemies and charging into danger... he couldn't help but feel uneasy, and worried. Yes, there was no other choice, but... it just didn't feel right for it to be that way. But it couldn't be helped. For now, all he could do was wait, and hope for the best.

His patience was soon rewarded; in the distance, he could see two dragons, one big and one small, flying towards him. It was them, or at least he presumed so. The worry and uneasiness were slowly disappearing, though that was to be expected. He got up, and moved out of the way, so that they could land. As they got closer, Ignitus could see them more clearly; it was, indeed, Spyro and Volteer. He gave a sigh of relief. He was glad just for the fact that Spyro was coming back safely, let alone with Volteer as well.

They were about to land. Spyro was ahead, so he would land first.

"Uh-oh... I still don't know how to land!" yelled Spyro.

"Great... look out below!!!" said Sparx.

Spyro tried his best to land; he crashed onto the balcony, and kept going till he bumped into Ignitus; luckily, neither of them were hurt. He looked up at Ignitus, and gave a nervous smile. Ignitus chuckled.

"Perhaps I should teach you more about flying, young dragon."

Spyro laughed, and nodded in agreement.
Whelp, I finally decided to write something again XD. I tried to make this one meaningful, but end on a humorous/cute note. Not sure how good this came out, but I hope it's okay XD.

So basically, we have Ignitus worrying about Spyro(again); then we have the moment at the end, which I have to say I really liked XD.

Ummm, one question; was the ending too abrupt? I'm not really sure... is there anything else that may be wrong with it? Remember guys, if there's anything wrong with it, please do point it out; I love constructive criticism :D.

Also... is the title any good??? For some reason, I couldn't come up with anything that seemed vaguely good to me... AGAIN...

Well, anyway, I hope you guys like it >_>...

Ignitus, Spyro, Volteer, and Sparx are copyright to Krome.
© 2008 - 2024 Ignitus1992
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Bleedingraptorclaw's avatar
splat. xD

I liked eet, though you could've had Ignitus greeting Volteer, or vice versa... :shrug: